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Conny Borgelioen's avatar

I enjoyed your poem, Sahib. I actually thought the "I"s are the pins holding up the lines of the poem :)

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Sahib J Chandnani's avatar

I love that! Vertical and horizontal pins! Now that I reread it, the Is are doing just as much work as the hyphens. Thank you for sharing :)

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